Dr. Jamie Bondage

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(We'll come find you after we find the earth? mkay? And you can create either a hunter or a knight?)

Name: Elena Age: 17 Gender: Female Role/affiliation: Princess Appearance/picture: She has long red hair. Her lips are perfect and a glorious bright red. She has a beauty mark under her ...

Alexandria Hale She was so excited she was practically bouncing in her seat. She had informed the plane they would be heading to the desert. She flashed Akeno a smile. ...

Adrian looked down at the beautiful creature shocked. His life was in danger...from this? He would have laughed at the ridiculousness of the situation if she had not come so ...

(Lol. I loved how you betrayed me.) Adrian: He was fuming. His anger was about to explode! He was older than her! He knew how to conduct missions. This was ...

Adrian Hale: He nodded. "Good. We need an advantage against those..." He was almost shaking with fury. He shook his head to clear his thoughts. "Where are we headed?" Alexandria ...

Adrian Hale: Adrian was exasperated with his sister. They went through this every time he wanted to go and have a little fun. Why did she always have to tag ...

Like a cold wind in winter, the absence of true love leaves one desperate for warmth. Violet did not understand how her life had turned out like this. One moment, ...

I loved this! It is really funny! The only mistake I spotted was, "And next to the counter, guess what found?" "She" should be inserted after "what" This was really ...

This was amazing! Really. I don't know what to critique about this poem. It really did blow me away. I love the imagery you present. Poetry is such a beautiful ...

Name: Adrian Hale Age: 23 Position in Society: Ambassadors son Sex: Male Preferred weapon: Sword Weaknesses: He is very proud and stuck up, and let's his pride get in the ...

Well...this is a start. 1. In lines 3 and 4, you use the word "look" twice, which does not follow with true grammatical editing. Change the second look. Also, every ...

I like it in general. The words convey a very vivid picture in the reader's mind. I do not like the flow of the poem, but that is a personal ...

Name: Logan Woods Age: Around 5,000, but looks like he is 20. Location: He is near the Arabian dessert at the moment, being well taken care of by the princesses ...